Tuesday, December 4, 2018

The Grumpy Bears

5 comments:

  1. Jae Yoon, You read your essay in a good clear voice. You explained the lesson well and used the retell to support your idea. I look forward to seeing and hearing more of your work!
    Mrs. J

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  2. I like your detail.
    You made the book sound interesting.
    I wish you add more detail.

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  3. I like how you read in a clear voice.

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  4. I think you should read with more expression

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